Jakarta Needs A Lots Of Improvement

Life in this city needs to be improved. For one thing, there are too many cars, and there is too much smog, especially at rush hour. The air pollution is terrible. This problem is particularly bad downtown in the Jakarta. Too many people drive their cars to work.

So what should we do about it? I think people shouldn’t drive their own cars; they can use public transportation at busy intersections. I believe that it could stop traffic jams. We also need fewer parking lots in the downtown. The city spends too much money to building them. It’s easy to park, so too many people drive to work. On the other hand, the city doesn’t spend enough on public transportations. Jakarta should have more public transportation to solve the traffic jams. Factually, the life in Jakarta needs a lot of improvement.